for the shake out we had to drop cover hold under the table then we had to walk up a hill to safety then we had to listened to what our principle had to say then we headed back to school
Kia Ora Zach, I like your post on the shake out although your writing doesn't really make any sense. I like the way you have included a video. Maybe next time you could check your wording and punctuation. Good job Honor
Kia Ora Zach, my name is Jedi and I am a year eight in rimu class. This post is pretty good, although it seems a little simple. Now I know that the shake out was all that although, to add to it maybe you could say what you were feeling during this moment. I remember that my friends and I were joking about the fact that when we were lining up to go back to class from the shake out. There could a be a real earthquake. Did you or your friends have similar thoughts?
Kia Ora Zach, I like your post on the shake out although your writing doesn't really make any sense. I like the way you have included a video. Maybe next time you could check your wording and punctuation.
ReplyDeleteGood job
Honor
Hi there Zach, my name is Abby and I am a year 7 student at Yaldhurst Model School. That video looks really interesting.
ReplyDeleteWOW! I really like the way you chose a interesting title and even included a video on what to do if there is an earthquake.
We also had a earthquake practice not to long ago but we didn't have to walk up a hill. We just walked to our big field.
Next time you could reread your writing to check that it makes sense. You could also add more detail for what you were feeling and what you did.
Were you scared?
Kind regards,
Abby.
Kia Ora Zach,
ReplyDeletemy name is Jedi and I am a year eight in rimu class. This post is pretty good, although it seems a little simple. Now I know that the shake out was all that although, to add to it maybe you could say what you were feeling during this moment. I remember that my friends and I were joking about the fact that when we were lining up to go back to class from the shake out. There could a be a real earthquake.
Did you or your friends have similar thoughts?
-Jedi 😁