At tech this Week we have been making bots out of steel rod for The head we bent the rod in to a square then spot weld it we are making the bots out of scrap metal and selling them.
Hello Zach My name is Hazel,I'm a year 8 from Pt England school.
What I like about your post is How you made bots at Tech.How you wrote your writing was out of this world.
Next time you could add more information about making and adding if you know what I mean.Also to make your readers more interested you need to give them a hook in your writing. To grab your readers attention
Hello Zach
ReplyDeleteMy name is Hazel,I'm a year 8 from Pt England school.
What I like about your post is How you made bots at Tech.How you wrote your writing was out of this world.
Next time you could add more information about making and adding if you know what I mean.Also to make your readers more interested you need to give them a hook in your writing. To grab your readers attention
other than that..
Keep it up zach