here is the photo and the start of my writing.
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Showing posts with label writing. Show all posts
Friday, 1 November 2019
writing
For writing we are doing spooky writing. We have to find a photo and write a spooky story about it,
here is the photo and the start of my writing.
here is the photo and the start of my writing.
Tuesday, 15 May 2018
Descriptive Writing
This week for writing, we have been working on writing a description for this image. We had to focus on our senses. I found it challenging to come up with a description for each sense. Here is what I came up with!

See- I can see People screaming in fear as they go round and round on a roller coaster.
Hear- I can hear the scream of the scared mother as her kid is going on a crazy roller coaster.
Feel- I can feel people pushing past me in excitement trying to get to there favorite ride on time.
Taste- taste fresh popcorn melting in my mouth like at the movies
Smell- I can smell the pink sugary candy floss dissolving in my throat.
See- I can see People screaming in fear as they go round and round on a roller coaster.
Hear- I can hear the scream of the scared mother as her kid is going on a crazy roller coaster.
Feel- I can feel people pushing past me in excitement trying to get to there favorite ride on time.
Taste- taste fresh popcorn melting in my mouth like at the movies
Smell- I can smell the pink sugary candy floss dissolving in my throat.
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