Tuesday, 15 May 2018

Descriptive Writing

This week for writing, we have been working on writing a description for this image. We had to focus on our senses. I found it challenging to come up with a description for each sense. Here is what I came up with!



See- I can see People screaming in fear as they go round and round on a roller coaster.

Hear- I can hear the scream of the scared mother as her kid is going on a crazy roller coaster.

Feel- I can feel people pushing past me in excitement trying to get to there favorite ride on time.

Taste- taste fresh popcorn melting in my mouth like at the movies

Smell- I can smell the pink sugary candy floss dissolving in my throat.

1 comment:

  1. hi zack i love the work the done a what is that by Tane moody

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