I'm Grace a year 7 student from Yaldhurst Model School.
I really like your blog post because it explains about the myth. Next time you could write down your reaction and what you think about about the myth and what you could do in the snow, but apart from that its really good,
Hi Zach, It's Mikael from Yaldhurst school. I like how you have done your myth about skingn. I really like skying as well. Next time I think you should work on you punctuation. Apart from that I like it.
Kia Ora,
ReplyDeleteI'm Grace a year 7 student from Yaldhurst Model School.
I really like your blog post because it explains about the myth.
Next time you could write down your reaction and what you think about about the myth and what you could do in the snow, but apart from that its really good,
Kind regards Grace
Hi Zach, It's Mikael from Yaldhurst school. I like how you have done your myth about skingn. I really like skying as well. Next time I think you should work on you punctuation. Apart from that I like it.
ReplyDeleteKia Ora Zach it's Kaleb here.
ReplyDeleteI really like your blog post about snow. I also did my myth on snow. Next time you could tell us a bit more about why you like skiing.
Kai Pai from Kaleb